If you'd like for the community to give you some assistance with your character - be it anything from giving it a quick lore-compliance glance-over, or a full on character-building from scratch - just ask!
Tag your post [WIP] or [Advice Wanted] or something along those lines in the title, and the community will be more than happy to drop in and help you out.
Once you've gotten the feedback you need, be sure to change your post title and remove the [WIP].
Community members, please - if you see a tag, go in and help if you can.
Thanks for making our roleplay community great!